Your rendering is very nice (as expected) but there is something wrong with the heads. You should construct them (at least in your brain) as solid objects first. In several of these pictures the eyes are not aligned. Also, you seem to be doing something strange to the perspective lines. Take a careful look: instead of converging toward infinity, the parallel lines defined by the mouth and the eye lines are actually diverging! That gives a strange, creepy look to the heads no matter how good the rendering.
Just an opinion. It’s always easier to spot from the outside (I should know, I keep making the same mistakes over and over)
Fevereiro 19, 2009 ás 7:39 pm |
Your rendering is very nice (as expected) but there is something wrong with the heads. You should construct them (at least in your brain) as solid objects first. In several of these pictures the eyes are not aligned. Also, you seem to be doing something strange to the perspective lines. Take a careful look: instead of converging toward infinity, the parallel lines defined by the mouth and the eye lines are actually diverging! That gives a strange, creepy look to the heads no matter how good the rendering.
Just an opinion. It’s always easier to spot from the outside (I should know, I keep making the same mistakes over and over)
Fevereiro 24, 2009 ás 12:01 am |
You are right! I am just starting to understand face perspective.
Went for a walk on your blog and liked both your artwork and writing. Thanks for stopping by.